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Jan Levine
New York Rangers
Joined: 09.16.2005

Mar 26 @ 10:41 AM ET
Jan, you either need an editor or you need to much more carefully proof your copy. Lots of missing words, etc. Your writing screams amateur hour.
- gregman98

Thanks for the feedback. Just re-read, left out one word and changed two, each of which could have stayed the same, but opted to modify them. Have a good day.
Jan Levine
New York Rangers
Joined: 09.16.2005

Mar 26 @ 10:42 AM ET
Jan, I give you credit for still being able to write re-caps to these games
- jimbro83

Not easy, trust me. The Jacob deGrom high from his signing is helping
picklerick
New York Rangers
Location: New York, NY
Joined: 03.01.2018

Mar 26 @ 10:42 AM ET
Thanks for the feedback. Just re-read, left out one word and changed two, each of which could have stayed the same, but opted to modify them. Have a good day.
- airjan23


You are a much better person than i
Jan Levine
New York Rangers
Joined: 09.16.2005

Mar 26 @ 10:42 AM ET
You guys doing an outstanding job backing up the trolley into the lottery picture.

IDK if it's purely tank or stank, but it's a great time of year to be losing.

- Queenie_5_hole

Can you please win Monday and have us fall behind you.
tbreinold
New York Rangers
Location: NJ
Joined: 02.14.2007

Mar 26 @ 10:43 AM ET
Jan, you either need an editor or you need to much more carefully proof your copy. Lots of missing words, etc. Your writing screams amateur hour.
- gregman98



You should probably spend time proofing what you write before you judge others. "need to much more carefully proof" is on par with my five year old's writing capabilities.
2sticks1puck
New York Rangers
Location: The not quite neutral zone
Joined: 01.31.2019

Mar 26 @ 10:46 AM ET
Not easy, trust me. The Jacob deGrom high from his signing is helping
- airjan23


The only bad thing is that when the Mets are good, I just can't snag up absurd things on the company march of dimes auction. Last year I got to pay 100 for going to BP before the game and sitting in the beer garden with unlimited beer. I've gotten in the company suite for like 125 before. When the Mets are good, that's out the window lol.
Slimtj100
New York Rangers
Location: Panarins NYC apt
Joined: 03.04.2013

Mar 26 @ 10:46 AM ET
You should probably spend time proofing what you write before you judge others. "need to much more carefully proof" is on par with my five year old's writing capabilities.
- tbreinold

I two right and speel teribbly and I no it.
eichiefs9
New York Islanders
Location: NY
Joined: 11.03.2008

Mar 26 @ 10:47 AM ET


I was going to point this out to....got em

- TPC

Maybe all three of you can get a discount on one
picklerick
New York Rangers
Location: New York, NY
Joined: 03.01.2018

Mar 26 @ 10:47 AM ET
You should probably spend time proofing what you write before you judge others. "need to much more carefully proof" is on par with my five year old's writing capabilities.
- tbreinold


I think what he said was fine. proof being short-hand for proof-read. We can just pick him apart for being a troll
mdw7413
New York Rangers
Location: I would rather see a dudes hairy balls than his hairy feet-Jimbro
Joined: 12.13.2013

Mar 26 @ 10:49 AM ET
Jan, you either need an editor or you need to much more carefully proof your copy. Lots of missing words, etc. Your writing screams amateur hour.
- gregman98


You need a (frank)ing hobby
eichiefs9
New York Islanders
Location: NY
Joined: 11.03.2008

Mar 26 @ 10:49 AM ET
I think what he said was fine. proof being short-hand for proof-read. We can just pick him apart for being a troll
- picklerick

Just to be clear, I was pointing out his moronic-sounding sentence that said that Jan needs to "much more carefully" do something
eichiefs9
New York Islanders
Location: NY
Joined: 11.03.2008

Mar 26 @ 10:50 AM ET
You need a (frank)ing hobby
- mdw7413

What if grammar IS his hobby
Slimtj100
New York Rangers
Location: Panarins NYC apt
Joined: 03.04.2013

Mar 26 @ 10:50 AM ET
I think what he said was fine. proof being short-hand for proof-read. We can just pick him apart for being a troll
- picklerick

No no no. If you rip someone for writing something, you better make damn sure you don’t (frank) up yourself

mdw7413
New York Rangers
Location: I would rather see a dudes hairy balls than his hairy feet-Jimbro
Joined: 12.13.2013

Mar 26 @ 10:51 AM ET
What if grammar IS his hobby
- eichiefs9


That would be sad on so many levels
eichiefs9
New York Islanders
Location: NY
Joined: 11.03.2008

Mar 26 @ 10:52 AM ET
That would be sad on so many levels
- mdw7413

picklerick
New York Rangers
Location: New York, NY
Joined: 03.01.2018

Mar 26 @ 10:54 AM ET
No no no. If you rip someone for writing something, you better make damn sure you don’t (frank) up yourself
- Slimtj100


I agree and I retract my previous call for leniency. trash this fool
Fenrir
New York Rangers
Location: Jesus saves! Satan picks up the rebound...AND SCORES!!, NJ
Joined: 04.02.2015

Mar 26 @ 10:58 AM ET
What if grammar IS his hobby
- eichiefs9

mdw7413
New York Rangers
Location: I would rather see a dudes hairy balls than his hairy feet-Jimbro
Joined: 12.13.2013

Mar 26 @ 11:00 AM ET

- Fenrir


How do you know grandma doesn't taste like filet mignon?
JRR1285
New York Rangers
Location: Coach's decision, PEI
Joined: 02.21.2008

Mar 26 @ 11:02 AM ET
How do you know grandma doesn't taste like filet mignon?
- mdw7413



Slimtj100
New York Rangers
Location: Panarins NYC apt
Joined: 03.04.2013

Mar 26 @ 11:05 AM ET
Anyone see that basketball players injury last night??? Ouchhhhhhhyyyyyy
2sticks1puck
New York Rangers
Location: The not quite neutral zone
Joined: 01.31.2019

Mar 26 @ 11:07 AM ET
How do you know grandma doesn't taste like filet mignon?
- mdw7413


I think ole Jeffrey would have told us if that was the case.
mdw7413
New York Rangers
Location: I would rather see a dudes hairy balls than his hairy feet-Jimbro
Joined: 12.13.2013

Mar 26 @ 11:07 AM ET

- JRR1285

TPC
New York Rangers
Location: Bucks County, PA
Joined: 01.18.2008

Mar 26 @ 11:08 AM ET
Maybe all three of you can get a discount on one
- eichiefs9

eat my shorts
mdw7413
New York Rangers
Location: I would rather see a dudes hairy balls than his hairy feet-Jimbro
Joined: 12.13.2013

Mar 26 @ 11:08 AM ET
I think ole Jeffrey would have told us if that was the case.
- 2sticks1puck


Jeffery liked the dark meat
Fenrir
New York Rangers
Location: Jesus saves! Satan picks up the rebound...AND SCORES!!, NJ
Joined: 04.02.2015

Mar 26 @ 11:08 AM ET

- JRR1285

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