Anaheim model, we need to trade for some ex Canuck vets.

Garrison, sign ufa Bonino, anyone else?
- Pres.cup

If I was the rest of the league I would be trading for ex Canuck players always . They always seem to win a cup somewhere elseor go deep in the playoffs.

Cooke Bonino Bieksa Kes Burrows Glass Garrison

Yes cuz center is a position they should look to add
- Redmile247

You got swept in the first round , you team is not a powerhouse

Lefty's new BFF
- VANTEL

This made my head hurt, without commas in the correct place it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.

I've fixed it below.

Not surprising. A lot of teams might feel dumb if they pass over a guy, who was seen as a top-2 pick, after he had mono, only to have him bounce back when healthy.

Sorry Makita.
- Pres.cup

Well, the bolded is an example of a comma splice.

I've fixed it below.

This made my head hurt. Without commas in the correct place(sic), it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.

Alternatively you could have used a semi-colon if you wanted to keep it as one long sentence.

Or maybe remember that this is a hockey board. People here know that the player in question hasn't been drafted yet, and from that context they can pretty easily draw the intended meaning. Also, this is the internet and not a goddamn formal essay.


Sorry Makita.

Lefty's new BFF
- VANTEL

Some guys just get it

You got swept in the first round , you team is not a powerhouse
- VANTEL

Lol, even we didn't go through the embarrassment of being swept in the first round ....
We knew better and just gradually folded before that became a possibility.

I'd pick top five then get swept in the first round...

This made my head hurt, without commas in the correct place it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.

I've fixed it below.

Not surprising. A lot of teams might feel dumb if they pass over a guy, who was seen as a top-2 pick, after he had mono, only to have him bounce back when healthy.

Sorry Makita.
- Pres.cup

It is still kind of awkward.

I think if you change "after" to "before" it reads better maybe?

You got swept in the first round , you team is not a powerhouse
- VANTEL

I never said they were

Your sure testy this morning ...are your in laws in town ?

Canucks are looking to add at centre ...flames are not ...that's all it was

Well, the bolded is an example of a comma splice.

I've fixed it below.

This made my head hurt. Without commas in the correct place(sic), it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.

Alternatively you could have used a semi-colon if you wanted to keep it as one long sentence.

Or maybe remember that this is a hockey board. People here know that the player in question hasn't been drafted yet, and from that context they can pretty easily draw the intended meaning. Also, this is the internet and not a goddamn formal essay.


Sorry Makita.
- Feeling Glucky?

Flagged for going too far but you're correct, I should have used a semi-colon instead.
Unfortunately my semi-colon isn't in my quick action Google keyboard, but my coma is.

And the original post literally meant the exact opposite of what you were trying to say, ironic or lazy?

Some guys just get it
- LeftCoaster

But we do!

Internet high five!

👋

I never said they were

Your sure testy this morning ...are your in laws in town ?

Canucks are looking to add at centre ...flames are not ...that's all it was
- Redmile247

He spilt his box of wine.

Lol, even we didn't go through the embarrassment of being swept in the first round ....
We knew better and just gradually folded before that became a possibility.

I'd pick top five then get swept in the first round...
- Pres.cup

Your right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...

Bo>RNH

Fragility aide they're close, but Bo is a tank, RNH is a Barbie convertible.
- Pres.cup

not comparing styles. just as 2C as their ceilings.

He spilt his box of wine.
- SRam19

Ahhhh makes sense now

It is still kind of awkward.

I think if you change "after" to "before" it reads better maybe?
- Aetherial

Flagged for not apologizing to Makita.

Also...
You're so right....

Your right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...
- Redmile247

But we do!

Internet high five!

👋
- Pres.cup

Your right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...
- Redmile247

All in Benning's "master-plan".....and you have some incorrect spelling there

Anaheim model, we need to trade for some ex Canuck vets.

Garrison, sign ufa Bonino, anyone else?
- Pres.cup

I will add that to the Detroit model, the Leafs model, the Edmonton model, the Nashville model, the Calgary model, the Tampa Bay model and now the Anaheim model.

You're right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...
- Redmile247

Quit embarrassing yourself, Red.
Sorry Makita

This year my team finally stopped aiming for a first round sweep, which is step one.

Presidents cup or bust.

Flagged for going too far but you're correct, I should have used a semi-colon instead.
Unfortunately my semi-colon isn't in my quick action Google keyboard, but my coma is.

And the original post literally meant the exact opposite of what you were trying to say, ironic or lazy?
- Pres.cup

In the end, you understood it. Aetherial understood it. Everyone on the board who can read understood it. Bloated Mosquito will have it explained to him.

It's not formal writing, it doesn't really matter, as long as the message is conveyed.

Quit embarrassing yourself, Red.
Sorry Makita.

This year my team finally stopped aiming for a first round sweep, which is step one.

President's cup or bust.
- Pres.cup

*ahem*

not comparing styles. just as 2C as their ceilings.
- storm88

Bo and Dr Dre are built like prototypical 2LC with 1LC upside, RNH is built like a poor man's 1LC, or a 3LC pp specialist alla Sam ganger.

I'd argue that Bo is better at faceoffs, off the rush and along the boards, RNH is a better playmaker and is better at being shattered like old porcelain.

I never said they were

Your sure testy this morning ...are your in laws in town ?

Canucks are looking to add at centre ...flames are not ...that's all it was
- Redmile247

I am not testy this morning I am laughing . My penmanship is testy maybe , it has a mind of its own.

In the end, you understood it. Aetherial understood it. Everyone on the board who can read understood it. Bloated Mosquito will have it explained to him.

It's not formal writing, it doesn't really matter, as long as the message is conveyed.
- Feeling Glucky?

GO HOME


Poorly conveyed, resulting in pages of grammer dialogue......