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Anaheim model, we need to trade for some ex Canuck vets.
Garrison, sign ufa Bonino, anyone else? - Pres.cup
If I was the rest of the league I would be trading for ex Canuck players always . They always seem to win a cup somewhere elseor go deep in the playoffs.
Cooke Bonino Bieksa Kes Burrows Glass Garrison |
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Yes cuz center is a position they should look to add  - Redmile247
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Lefty's new BFF - VANTEL
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Feeling Glucky?
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This made my head hurt, without commas in the correct place it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.
I've fixed it below.
Not surprising. A lot of teams might feel dumb if they pass over a guy, who was seen as a top-2 pick, after he had mono, only to have him bounce back when healthy.
Sorry Makita. - Pres.cup
Well, the bolded is an example of a comma splice.
I've fixed it below.
This made my head hurt. Without commas in the correct place(sic), it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.
Alternatively you could have used a semi-colon if you wanted to keep it as one long sentence.
Or maybe remember that this is a hockey board. People here know that the player in question hasn't been drafted yet, and from that context they can pretty easily draw the intended meaning. Also, this is the internet and not a goddamn formal essay.
Sorry Makita. |
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Lefty's new BFF - VANTEL
Some guys just get it |
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Pres.cup
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You got swept in the first round , you team is not a powerhouse  - VANTEL
Lol, even we didn't go through the embarrassment of being swept in the first round  ....
We knew better and just gradually folded before that became a possibility.
I'd pick top five then get swept in the first round... |
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This made my head hurt, without commas in the correct place it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.
I've fixed it below.
Not surprising. A lot of teams might feel dumb if they pass over a guy, who was seen as a top-2 pick, after he had mono, only to have him bounce back when healthy.
Sorry Makita. - Pres.cup
It is still kind of awkward.
I think if you change "after" to "before" it reads better maybe? |
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You got swept in the first round , you team is not a powerhouse  - VANTEL
I never said they were
Your sure testy this morning ...are your in laws in town ?
Canucks are looking to add at centre ...flames are not ...that's all it was |
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Well, the bolded is an example of a comma splice.
I've fixed it below.
This made my head hurt. Without commas in the correct place(sic), it reads as if he was a top 2 pick after he had mono, which is the opposite of what you were trying to say.
Alternatively you could have used a semi-colon if you wanted to keep it as one long sentence.
Or maybe remember that this is a hockey board. People here know that the player in question hasn't been drafted yet, and from that context they can pretty easily draw the intended meaning. Also, this is the internet and not a goddamn formal essay.
Sorry Makita. - Feeling Glucky?
Flagged for going too far but you're correct, I should have used a semi-colon instead.
Unfortunately my semi-colon isn't in my quick action Google keyboard, but my coma is.
And the original post literally meant the exact opposite of what you were trying to say, ironic or lazy?
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Some guys just get it  - LeftCoaster
But we do!
Internet high five!
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I never said they were
Your sure testy this morning ...are your in laws in town ?
Canucks are looking to add at centre ...flames are not ...that's all it was - Redmile247
He spilt his box of wine. |
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Bo>RNH
Fragility aide they're close, but Bo is a tank, RNH is a Barbie convertible. - Pres.cup
not comparing styles. just as 2C as their ceilings. |
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He spilt his box of wine. - SRam19
Ahhhh makes sense now |
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It is still kind of awkward.
I think if you change "after" to "before" it reads better maybe? - Aetherial
Flagged for not apologizing to Makita.
Also...
You're so right.... |
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Your right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...  - Redmile247
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But we do!
Internet high five!
👋 - Pres.cup
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LeftCoaster
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Location: Shark City, CA Joined: 07.03.2009
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Your right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...  - Redmile247
All in Benning's "master-plan".....and you have some incorrect spelling there |
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Anaheim model, we need to trade for some ex Canuck vets.
Garrison, sign ufa Bonino, anyone else? - Pres.cup
I will add that to the Detroit model, the Leafs model, the Edmonton model, the Nashville model, the Calgary model, the Tampa Bay model and now the Anaheim model. |
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Pres.cup
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You're right ...you avoided any embarrassment this year ...  - Redmile247
Quit embarrassing yourself, Red.
Sorry Makita
This year my team finally stopped aiming for a first round sweep, which is step one.
Presidents cup or bust. |
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Flagged for going too far but you're correct, I should have used a semi-colon instead.
Unfortunately my semi-colon isn't in my quick action Google keyboard, but my coma is.
And the original post literally meant the exact opposite of what you were trying to say, ironic or lazy? - Pres.cup
In the end, you understood it. Aetherial understood it. Everyone on the board who can read understood it. Bloated Mosquito will have it explained to him.
It's not formal writing, it doesn't really matter, as long as the message is conveyed. |
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Feeling Glucky?
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Quit embarrassing yourself, Red.
Sorry Makita.
This year my team finally stopped aiming for a first round sweep, which is step one.
President's cup or bust.  - Pres.cup
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Pres.cup
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not comparing styles. just as 2C as their ceilings. - storm88
Bo and Dr Dre are built like prototypical 2LC with 1LC upside, RNH is built like a poor man's 1LC, or a 3LC pp specialist alla Sam ganger.
I'd argue that Bo is better at faceoffs, off the rush and along the boards, RNH is a better playmaker and is better at being shattered like old porcelain.
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I never said they were
Your sure testy this morning ...are your in laws in town ?
Canucks are looking to add at centre ...flames are not ...that's all it was - Redmile247
I am not testy this morning I am laughing . My penmanship is testy maybe , it has a mind of its own. |
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