yo hey just read this one, tell me if it's good.
- Oilers4Life14

Ok. I'll give it a chance. Link me boy

Ok. I'll give it a chance. Link me boy
- YzermanIsTheMan

Edit

yo hey just read this one, tell me if it's good.

http://my.hockeybuzz.com/...r_id=187461&post_id=16312
- Oilers4Life14

Ok. I read I it and see my writing style of when I was in seventh grade writing a report on world war two. It gets the facts out and tells the reader what every other blog would. It's not bad, just redundant compared to other draft blogs. I'd focus on what the picks will do for the team more and expand much more than you did on that subject. Back up your opinions with some stats. Tons of asshats love stats these days.

But overall is a good start for you. Keep writing.I did and got published eventually.

So tempted to write a blog.

What do you guys think, I mean it'll give you more hate material.
- Oilers4Life14

(frank)ed if I care. I won't read it anyways.

yo hey just read this one, tell me if it's good.

http://my.hockeybuzz.com/...r_id=187461&post_id=16312
- Oilers4Life14

Sucked.

Sucked.
- Jeropotato

Just like his mom.but she sucked at sucking.

What in the (frank) is an ubermench ?
- Jeropotato

If I was being female dogy I'd tell you to google it, but since I'm not.

Ubermensch is the German term for "Above-Human" often used as to denote the Aryan race in their indoctrination and political propaganda.

Ok. I read I it and see my writing style of when I was in seventh grade writing a report on world war two. It gets the facts out and tells the reader what every other blog would. It's not bad, just redundant compared to other draft blogs. I'd focus on what the picks will do for the team more and expand much more than you did on that subject. Back up your opinions with some stats. Tons of asshats love stats these days.

But overall is a good start for you. Keep writing.I did and got published eventually.
- YzermanIsTheMan

Good start? That's like his 15th blog, and they were all garbage. I wrote a couple. Last one was meh, but my first one was amazing.

If I was being female dogy I'd tell you to google it, but since I'm not.

Ubermensch is the German term for "Above-Human" often used as to denote the Aryan race in their indoctrination and political propaganda.
- AdamFrench

I was kidding, I sorta knew what It meant...I thought it was the Ultimate Man so I was close.

Ok. I read I it and see my writing style of when I was in seventh grade writing a report on world war two. It gets the facts out and tells the reader what every other blog would. It's not bad, just redundant compared to other draft blogs. I'd focus on what the picks will do for the team more and expand much more than you did on that subject. Back up your opinions with some stats. Tons of asshats love stats these days.

But overall is a good start for you. Keep writing.I did and got published eventually.
- YzermanIsTheMan

Thanks man Defiantly (definitely) going to work on writing and getting better at it. Any tips on structure and how to make that better? I always feel as if there is a problem on it when I write in general.

I was kidding, I sorta knew what It meant...I thought it was the Ultimate Man so I was close.
- Jeropotato

You, are the ultimate man.

Sucked.
- Jeropotato

(frank)ed if I care. I won't read it anyways.
- Jeropotato

Niiiiceee

Good start? That's like his 15th blog, and they were all garbage. I wrote a couple. Last one was meh, but my first one was amazing.
- Jeropotato

Your first one made James Tanners look like Pulitzer prize winners.

Good start? That's like his 15th blog, and they were all garbage. I wrote a couple. Last one was meh, but my first one was amazing.
- Jeropotato

It's been improving since I started blogging on this site... Plus I am still in high school, I have time to learn old man

Thanks man Defiantly (definitely) going to work on writing and getting better at it. Any tips on structure and how to make that better? I always feel as if there is a problem on it when I write in general.
- Oilers4Life14

Don't go out of your way to help JB. I went out of my way to help him write a resume and prep him for a job interview and he didn't even leave the house to look for a job. Our government wastes enough money trying to pull this kids head out his ass at school, let them teach him how to write. You would be better trying to stop Racism in Kentucky than trying to prevent this POS from being a burdon on society.

Thanks man Defiantly (definitely) going to work on writing and getting better at it. Any tips on structure and how to make that better? I always feel as if there is a problem on it when I write in general.
- Oilers4Life14

Check pm.

Your first one made James Tanners look like Pulitzer prize winners.
- YzermanIsTheMan

Don't go out of your way to help JB. I went out of my way to help him write a resume and prep him for a job interview and he didn't even leave the house to look for a job. Our government wastes enough money trying to pull this kids head out his ass at school, let them teach him how to write. You would be better trying to stop Racism in Kentucky than trying to prevent this POS from being a burdon on society.
- Jeropotato

I have enough racism in Tennessee to worry about let alone Kentucky.

Check pm.
- YzermanIsTheMan

- Jeropotato

Ever read my terrible drunken rant?

I have enough racism in Tennessee to worry about let alone Kentucky.
- YzermanIsTheMan

That first blog about fixing the defense was money! What didn't you like about it?

- Jeropotato

Don't make me whoop you boy.

Don't go out of your way to help JB. I went out of my way to help him write a resume and prep him for a job interview and he didn't even leave the house to look for a job. Our government wastes enough money trying to pull this kids head out his ass at school, let them teach him how to write. You would be better trying to stop Racism in Kentucky than trying to prevent this POS from being a burdon on society.
- Jeropotato

I don't like copying, hence why I didn't. Also my Great Uncle whom I knew pretty well died the same day... So (frank) off. Please.

That first blog about fixing the defense was money! What didn't you like about it?
- Jeropotato

It's not bad. But really seemed like a fanboy`s wet dream of how to get Myers or Bogo.

Ok. I read I it and see my writing style of when I was in seventh grade writing a report on world war two. It gets the facts out and tells the reader what every other blog would. It's not bad, just redundant compared to other draft blogs. I'd focus on what the picks will do for the team more and expand much more than you did on that subject. Back up your opinions with some stats. Tons of asshats love stats these days.

But overall is a good start for you. Keep writing.I did and got published eventually.
- YzermanIsTheMan

wtf??? A report on WWII is fact based. This lil spermrecepticle is writing from an opinion based viewpoint, without the benefit of any logic or reasoning. Call it like it is man.